marzo999's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ransom!]

Haha!

I totally didn't expect that!

[The Lazy Hero 3]

Better

This is a big improvement from your other two, but I suggest you ACTUALLY voice act, it's annoying...I just can't care to read the bubbles. The menu screen was great with the tree and everything. I also suggest that you put more time into these, you can add smoother lines using the Smooth tool when in selection mode, you can add more sounds and more than one camera angle. The frame to frame animation is good! It has strength to it and it beats shit out of my first flash! I love the attempt in this. The jokes are okay but I would try and spicing them up a bit. I found it hard to tell what was going on, WHO was speaking? The lines were to sloppy so it almost looked like scribbles on the page. Yes I understand that you are sort of noob, but TRY hard and it WILL turn out great! I also suggest adding colour to people, that is a way you can help us distinguish a person from another person, it makes your Flash a lot friendlier!

- Marzo

[Storytime with Grandpa]

That was...AWESOME!

I love the way you make fun of old people :D, it was great! Love the animation and the random thick lips! The toungues were very weird. I want to see more from you good luck!

[Vapour]

Great!

The human didn't look to well, he looked to flat or 2-dimensional. The fish and everything else was perfect! The effects were amazing, the blurring lighting and shine on water was great! Woah! Best loading bar I've ever seen! Good job!

Brown-Acid responds:

yeah the guy did look 2d....was gunna add shadings but the project had taken me long as it is......but it still held up well

[Verde]

Eerie

First off, I love the name of the Flash animation. "Verde" It's very original, the title brought me to the flash submission. I really like the animation it was simple but it looked great. The art style was creepy but interesting. Great job, make more like this.

[Abandon]

Hm nice.

This is way better than my first flash. The animation was a bit slow and the acting had no emotion in it. I liked the story a lot, and I would like to see a sequal because of the way you ended it. Who was that girl? Who was the baby? Good job and keep up the great work.

-marzo999

[The First Date]

I loved this!

Awesome! Keep it up!

[Milo takes a walk]

I liked it!

It was short and funny! Good Good!

Jrokk18 responds:

lol wasnt much to it i was just bored. but it was a little stomach tickler. thanx though :) i appreciate it

[I want a rock!]

I am so very sorry.

I can see the attempt in this. It was funny but the animation and graphics weren't very enjoyable. Also the sound quality was a bit off. And this animation is so short! Making it longer and and doing several tweaks should make you a star. Nice try and I'll stay tuned.

[LumberJack Story]

This is FUNNY!!!!

Love this the music fits!