marzo999's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Vapour]

Great!

The human didn't look to well, he looked to flat or 2-dimensional. The fish and everything else was perfect! The effects were amazing, the blurring lighting and shine on water was great! Woah! Best loading bar I've ever seen! Good job!

Brown-Acid responds:

yeah the guy did look 2d....was gunna add shadings but the project had taken me long as it is......but it still held up well

[Milo takes a walk]

I liked it!

It was short and funny! Good Good!

Jrokk18 responds:

lol wasnt much to it i was just bored. but it was a little stomach tickler. thanx though :) i appreciate it

[Space rabbit!]

I like your style

What's makes the animations you have good are the graphics. The randomness sometimes is funny but isn't enough to have a good flash. One thing I would suggest is writing your scripts before making the flash before actually writing it. I can see you are sill practicing but it needs better animation as well. One thing I can suggest is to do frame to frame animation which makes it look like people, objects ect. are a 3-d object. Keep up the great work and I voted this animation 3/5 :)

~Marzo999

seput responds:

thx for the great advices hope u liked it :D

[I like Icecream]

Here is some reasonable critisism:

I like Icecream is a great but needs work. First of all it's sort of a boring idea (please do not take any offense) and in some areas the animation needs to improve. The Google part was great I loved the creativity and the part with her licking the ice cream was animated perfectly. But the animation of when the ice cream was falling into her mouth wasn't so great (not the ice cream falling but here just standing there) It should have shown her trying to get the ice cream not just taking it. This critisism should help in future projects!

This is still a great flash.

~Marzo999

PizzaDude808 responds:

Ok. Thank you for the suggestions. I'll try to improve that within my next flash.