marzo999's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cigarettes Kill]

Needs improvement

This needs sounds and better animation. And don't use stick men. Also don't just use blue for all colours, take time on the drawings so they look attractive. I like your frame to frame animation it looked smooth good job this should be practice for the next step!

[Tablet]

I like that it's frame to frame

Good job I like it.

[Portal Slide]

I liked it!

This is in my favorites! It was short and finny and the animation was fluid! Good Job! 5/5

[Space rabbit!]

I like your style

What's makes the animations you have good are the graphics. The randomness sometimes is funny but isn't enough to have a good flash. One thing I would suggest is writing your scripts before making the flash before actually writing it. I can see you are sill practicing but it needs better animation as well. One thing I can suggest is to do frame to frame animation which makes it look like people, objects ect. are a 3-d object. Keep up the great work and I voted this animation 3/5 :)

~Marzo999

seput responds:

thx for the great advices hope u liked it :D

[Mr. Literal]

!!!!!!!!!!!!

LOVED THIS!!!!!!!!!

[I like Icecream]

Here is some reasonable critisism:

I like Icecream is a great but needs work. First of all it's sort of a boring idea (please do not take any offense) and in some areas the animation needs to improve. The Google part was great I loved the creativity and the part with her licking the ice cream was animated perfectly. But the animation of when the ice cream was falling into her mouth wasn't so great (not the ice cream falling but here just standing there) It should have shown her trying to get the ice cream not just taking it. This critisism should help in future projects!

This is still a great flash.

~Marzo999

PizzaDude808 responds:

Ok. Thank you for the suggestions. I'll try to improve that within my next flash.

[Don't Drink Juice]

Wow!

This is great!! Just needs sound!

[Super Metroid]

Nice Nice

This was a good flash submission, the problem with it was that the animation was kinda crappy, it wasn't fluid (it didn't move properly) and at times it seemed that you were getting lazy with the animation. Also the Space Pirates moved to slowly giving Samus easy kills. I loved the music it was great. The beginning in the Ceres Space Colony was very creepy which was a very good touch on this flash submission. Over all what made this so good was because the fact that you really loved Super Metroid. Only a true fan would be able to make this. Thanks for making this Good Luck on future submissions!

-Marzo999

[Castle Repercussions - D2]

that was...

felt a bit rushed...also i think it was to short, AAaand the dragin demon scene should have ended with them killing it not just switching to a different scene.

very very confusing not as good as the others but still very good.